17 March 2008

More Personification Poems

Emotions
by Emma Luisa Pesebre, I-Venus

The worry that sits beside you
Speaks as fast as the sea
You were watching while
the sky is weeping
And a leaf burns to cry

It's hard to forget those worries
But tears are easy to weep
To let the people know
the emotion that speaks.



Happiness
by Lovely Mae Laborte, I-Mars

The beauty in happiness is that it never weeps
Though trouble keeps on groaning
Though dreams burn from giving up
Though beauty disappears because of age.
Why?
Because happiness knows
That she can always just dance with trouble
For it to slowly depart
that she can always bring dreams back
If dreams dance with her in regaining
confidence, perseverance and determination
For happiness surely does a lot of dancing
And she also knows that though one's beauty can wither...
The inner beauty can never fade.

04 March 2008

Personification Exercise

I-Mars and I-Venus students came up with these short poems. They were given specific nouns and verbs which they randomly paired, allowing them to use personification as a literary device. These poems were written in less than thirty minutes.

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by Juvy Grace Garay, I-Venus

Ask the wind to swing with your life

The blanket of hope drinks all your tears

For you to see the wonderful world around.

Ask the beauty of the world to read your mournful story

And soon to wipe all your problems

Ask the moon to burn all the sorrowful pasts

For you to live in a world where

a beautiful life goes around.

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by Denvic Lensoco, I-Venus


One morning, the wind strongly weaves

As the train waits before it leaves

And as I wait outside I see

That all of the people are very busy



As I ride on the train, all are still busy

But they are still smiling at me

As I sit on the chair, I see from the window

The dusk that scatters from the meadow



As the train leaves and passes the shore

I see the waves swinging more

I feel that the time is so fast

Because I see that I’m on my way home at last.

Nature at Work

by Li-Anne Serrano, I-Venus

The tree folded his branches to pray,

And beside the rock, there he lay.

The stone yelled for he was hurt,

Then he complained to little Bert.



The sky swung his cloudy arms to signal,

To do a favor from his pal.

Dawn thinks it’s already time,

To brighten the day, what beautiful sunrise!




I Just Wrote This

by Marie Patricia Clemente, I-Mars

Happiness waits

As worry scatters

In every road of life

we pass by.

Dusk draws into the sky

Using the birds as its brush.

The windows hug the sceneries

That the curtain sees.

Happiness Builds on Me

by Ma. Jessica Joy Mantes, I-Mars

The leaf swims happily in the ocean,

The stone sleeps soundly on the shore.

As the nigh falls,

The morning sleeps.

As the sun rises,

Happiness builds on me.

My Teacher

by Jepee Jerome Celorico, I-Mars

The wind teaches you

As your anger waits.

The dusk weeps

And let your worries drown.



You just remember:

The wind teaches you

And let your worries drown.

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